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markrampionmarkrampion 03 Apr 2009 00:42
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I think that is a pretty solid essay in terms of its ideas, although no brilliance. I would work on creative balance against the theme that the past is repeated when it is not taught. This point is easy to drive home to the reader, so perhaps more subtleties in the way the language the poet uses alludes to the teacher's comprehensive view of the world (or maybe the students' views, or even the author's view? I'm not sure.)

Thanks for posting, I hope I am not too critical and that you read and understand my suggestions…

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